JESTSTAR VIETNAM/ PARALLEL STRUCTURE PRACTICE
Parallel structure means using the same pattern of syntactic structure of word, phrase or clause to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance. Equal grammatic units are used to include a list of actions or items. This art satisfies both logical and readable property. It also helps analyse information relationship effectively. Non-parallel structure makes less stronger anmd persuasive in writing.
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- In a press release issued on May 19, the VNA said it will codeshare with all domestic airlines of the JPA in the first phase, while a codeshare agreement with the JPA international airlines will be established in the second phase.
- He said the codeshare cooperation will bring about more convenient connections with lower spending for the VNA’s passengers.
- The domestic aviation industry needs significant capital to invest in infrastructure during 2015-20 to improve airline services.
- The seminar was held after airline firms including VietJet Air, the national flag carrier, Vietnam Airlines (VNA) and a number of businesses requested the rights for operating several airport buildings.
- The seminar was expected to clarify the plan to sell the airports’ operational rights to the public as well as enterprises who want to operate the airports in the future.
- The aviation sector began investing in infrastructure for the airports in 2001.
- He said the issue of allowing private businesses to take part in the operations management of airports and sea ports was a new subject in Viet Nam but not around the world.
- It is necessary to socialise the management and operation of airports following a modern model with advanced technology based on the principle of explicitness and equality between private and State-owned enterprises.
- The deputy chairman said that the selling of operational rights would ensure harmony between the interests of the State and businesses.
- According to the CAAV, the sale of operational rights will need to ensure six principles: national defence and security should not be affected; businesses that have obtained the operational rights should not be allowed to transfer them to other businesses; wholesome competition should be ensured and abuse of a monopoly should be prevented; civil aviation operations should be systematically maintained following planning; transparency should be ensured and the interests of the State should be protected; and the legitimate rights and interests of the workers should be protected.
